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 A Cold Plate For Two  [E]
Sometimes, the one closest to you lets you down.
by Phoenix
Review by Shubham
Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello Phoenix!

This is a nice poem and I like it. You've maintained the rhyme scheme to abab except for the last stanza which is just 2 lines.
Some lines are too long which breaks the flow and can be fixed by either making the long ones shorter or short ones a little longer.

The content is good and a small few fixes will definitely make you poem great!

Keep writing, and i'll keep reviewing.

Shubham
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