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Review of At Sunset  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, there, tYpO/T.Boilerman
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Trainr*

I saw your item listed in a post on the "Newsfeed" page. *Notepady*

*Laugh* Sixty seven words as only Da Boilerman can do it. *Target*

*Plug* You have the imagery and the giggles, chuckles, well, okay the laughs. I could picture the fumbling with the ring, the dropping of it and trying to retrieve it whilst maintaining a bit of grace under pressure --Not!

There was pressure building, indeed, but not of the graceful sort if you catch my drift, for I nearly caught yours it was that picturesque so to speak. *Balloony*

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""Really," she asked?" ["Really?" she asked.]

*Pig* All in all, lots of visuals and scent-uals packed into this very tight package!

Until next time--write on!

Regards,

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