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 The Cat in the Black Hat  [E]
A man, while wandering the street, meets a black cat.
by Lynda Miller
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello, Lynda Miller
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Cat2*

I'm also reviewing your poem as an entry in my "Comedy Newsletter (August 13, 2014)"  Contest. Thatnks for entering!

*Tophat* I found your poem to be quite humorous, which is one of my requirements for this type of contest. Not only did you supply some humor, you also whipped-up some cartoon-like animations of imagery in my mind's eye.

*Wave1* Now, writing a fourteen line poemedy is not an easy thing to do. There is that tight line-limit to use to the best of your abilities by squeezing in some chuckles and scenes to remember after the poem has been read.

Observations:

"why do you wonder
these streets" [wander]

"He then took off his black hat
and stuff the cat in there." [stuffed]

*Wand* Thank you so much for taking the challenge! Good luck. *Bigsmile*

Regards,
WebWitch
*Witch*




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