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 14-line poem, untitled  [E]
Comedy Newsletter poetry challenge
by Dave Gordon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, there,
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Cupcakeo*

Thank you for taking the Poemedy Challenge, in the "Comedy Newsletter (August 13, 2014)" !

*Shirt* You have followed the rules, a fourteen line comedy-poem, the strictness being on 14 for the WDC 14th Birthday and for humor, because that's what I like. *Smile*

*Buttonforward* You did a fine job of a poetically free-verse rhythm-rhyme, with a bit of sarcasm and a sprinkle of humor to tickle my fancy.

Loved these lines:

"The imp appears uninvited
The astral being flees
My fine work is corrupted!
The imp possesses me
And my lofty words
Turn to (ugh) COMDEY!" [COMEDY]

{c:grey *Skull* }Okay, me thinks this is a bit of a hint about my contest tearing away at your prolific poetic mind to come up with a 14 line poemedy. *Laugh*

(I knew this would be a challenge to all who like to write perfect poetic verse.)

"Evil Sprite" ehh? Yes, I am gigling. *Witch*

Good luck with the contest. And thanks again for entering!

Regards,
WebWitch




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