Hi Shubham .
My name is Carly and I am doing this review on behalf of "Invalid Item"  and the WDC Senior Mod Contest.
I have just read your poem "Invalid Item" , which I found when looking for a Newbie to read and wanted to share my thoughts with you. Please keep in mind this is only my opinion. Feel free to use or disregard any advise I give.


Overall Impressions:
I really like the essence of this poem. It's message resonates with me. We are all seekers in a way... looking to find God. The innocence of looking in the little boy pulls at those heartstrings. The old woman directs him, but his mother, who is the closest to him, tells him.


Characters:
A boy young and innocent searching for God.
A old woman who directs him to the buildings we build to 'hold' him.
The boy's mother gives the lesson he needs, what he is ultimately searching for.

Plot:
The poem tells a story and draws us along on the search.
Your poem is written in quatrains that have a rhyming pattern of a.b.c.b. and you hold to it through all 7 stanzas. Well done.


Favourite Part:
I love the last two stanzas. God lies within. And with childhood innocence he accepts this in faith.


Suggestions:
I see no spelling of grammar issues.


Additional Comments:
This is a well crafted poem. You have done an excellent job of it.


I enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing it. I hope my review was helpful and encouraging!





My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .