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 The realisation  [13+]
A very shot story about a relationship from a guy's point of view.
by Jennifer the daydreamer
Review of The realisation  
Review by jaya
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A good story on the fleeting relationships that men form. May be women too. The author has done a good job of depicting guilt and uneasy feeling of the guy who wanted to dump her after the novelty faded. Relinquishing deep relationships is not like giving up a shirt or two. Human feelings are sometimes, unexpectedly deeper than imagination. No wonder, the past caught on the man and clutched him to the core. Now, his life may not be the same with guilt overshadowing his life.

I like her character for being open with her feelings and yet not trying to beg him to stay on. No, that would have egged on him to feel justified.

Language and style are pretty interesting and sentences connected well.

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