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 One More Kiss  [E]
Senryu poem for Haiku and Senryu: A Contest and More...
by Betina Kroner
Review of One More Kiss  
Review by Shanachie
Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is very sweet. I like the description of his lips and how you want just one more kiss. I'm not familiar with the form of senryu, but I am of Haiku and you have accurately captured the form. Lovely job and beautiful descriptions. I love the use of the alliteration.
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