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Given: Sep 8, 2014 at 12:02pm
Length: 364 Characters |
364 w/o WritingML
I like the descriptions and also the way the story flows. You've got a good grasp of the world building here and even though I don't know exactly what the world is, I'm not lost and can easily follow what's going on. I'm curious to find out more about Ist'ek and would like to read more. No spelling or grammar errors and you've definitely grabbed my interest!
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