Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...I am still trying to review each member of the Game of Thrones.I honey thought I would be finished by now.

First impressions...I really enjoyed this poem. I love theimagery with Janus seeing both past and future.

Was the title interesting...yes, the title gives the reader an idea of what the poem is about but not too much information that the reader skips reading the whole piece.

Was the content rating appropriate...yes, nothing above an 'e' contained within it

Did you use a specific form of poetry...I did not detect a particular form. However, if one was used please let me know because I love to learn new poetry forms.

Did you follow the form...n/a

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...there was no rhyme scheme

Did the rhymes seem forced...n/a

Were words forced to fit syllable count...n/a

Was there rhythm and flow...your poem had wonderful flow from line to line and stanza to stanza. Your use of alliteration in line 12 helped the flow as well. The poem was well structured and well written. Excellent job!

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...no noted

Things I would change...I would not change anything in this piece. I am impressed to see that this was written for the Writer's Cramp. You have composed a beautiful poem within a short time and you should be proud of this!

Favorite parts/lines...I loved the imagery in these lines in particular;

allows history to pass through,
without ever witnessing
it being made.

Again, great job.
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