Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...am still attempting to review all the participants from the Game of Thrones. I really thought I would be done by now.

First impressions...I didn't know what to expect from this poem. I rarely read/review erotica and if I do it is usually in short story form. I knew poems to be sensual and you definitely hit the mark with this one.

Was the title interesting...very, the title is what caught my eye and lead me to read this piece.

Was the content rating appropriate...yes

Did you use a specific form of poetry...quatrain

Did you follow the form...yes lines per stanza.

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...abcb

Did the rhymes seem forced...none of the lines seemed forced. The rhymes were natural.

Were words forced to fit syllable count...no

Was there rhythm and flow...The poem flowed effortlessly from one line to another. The poem increased in desire from one stanza to the next until climax was achieved.

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...I noted errors in any of these areas. Excellent job!

Things I would change...I do not believe I would change anything within this poem.

Favorite parts/lines...there were no particular parts I enjoyed more than others. The poem as a whole was wonderful.

Awesome job with a well written poem. Keep up the great writing and I hope to visit your portfolio again soon.


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