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 Im a Dragon  [E]
Failure is not an option
by believe18
Review of Im a Dragon  
Review by Lynda Miller
Rated: E | (3.0)
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You have a good writing piece, but you need to go back and use some grammar marks such as commas. And is the end chose or choice?
Redo it and it will be wonderful. Keep on writing.
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