** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Greetings BillieGail memory of Cheyenne ! Jacquiebee here, and I came across your introduction of Brandy when I visited your port for something to review. Now that I have read and enjoyed "Invalid Item" , I offer to you my thoughts and impressions. This review reflects my opinion only, so at your discretion, please keep or discard my views. I hope this encourages you.

Purpose:
Billie Gail, you have been incredibly busy and I am excited for you and the progress you are making in the Paper Doll Gang. I'm glad that you and Brandy were partnered up and that you have gotten to know about her, and she you. I have to say that the cover photo you selected is hilarious, and really grabbed my attention. I hope you continue to enjoy your time with the PDG, and it is clear that you have applied what you have been learning. I wish you great success.

What I See:
Your introduction of Brandy to the rest of us gives good information. I love that you begin at the beginning giving vital statistics about where she grew up and when her love of writing began. It's always helpful to know specific details about others to gain insight, such as; she works part time as a substitute teacher and that she loves writing so much she gets up early enough so that she can incorporate it into her day. I enjoyed reading about her daughter's activities, it's a clear picture of how busy she is and how committed to her girls she is. The bit about her "zoo" is a fun piece of information as well. Thank you for including the information that paints more of a picture of who Brandy is for the rest of us.

Overall/Suggestions:
Billie, you write with wonderful detail and care, and I would like to offer these thoughts for your consideration:
The only thing I would add, would be how long she has been married, and maybe what her husband's occupation is.
"She wakes up at five and six a.m. to write so that no matter how busy her day gets she gets in some writing." Maybe saying, "She wakes up between five and six a.m." would read smoother.

Favorite Lines:
"She claims to have a zoo with her husband, daughters and her animals. She has 2 Labradors, 3 cats, 2 goldfish, 3 hermit crabs, 2 guinea pigs and 1 cockatiel." This is a warm and personal touch that adds lightness to an otherwise very busy life. And I have to say I agree with Brandy, I can see how she would feel she has a zoo.

Closing Thought:
BillieGail memory of Cheyenne , thank you for sharing this introduction of Brandy with us, it was a joy to read and I feel I know her better now. I also appreciate your sweet request at the end: "She is a pleasure to know and I invite you to send her a message of encouragement or some something funny to brighten her day. I am sure she will love it." This is lovely and I am sure she appreciates your thoughtfulness.

You last responded to this review 09/10/2014 @ 8:52pm EDT

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