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 Happy  [E]
I am in a great mood today. I just wrote this. I hope you like it!
by pugmonster2
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Hi pugmonster2 !

First of all, welcome to WdC. I found this wonderful piece as a random review.

Your poem is exactly how I feel when I am in a good mood. Everything's bright and I just want to forgive even the people who have hurt me the most or those who are extremely annoying.

I like the second verse because it shows the reasons why people become happy.

My personal thought/ belief is that happiness should be internal; it should not be determined by external factors most of the time. I know it is hard to be happy when something negative in the external world has happened, but we should try as much as possible not to be unhappy because of the environment especially if it's not something majorly negative.

Thanks for sharing this poem. Write on!

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