Hi Paul D ,

First of all congratulations for managing to write a sonnet because I personally find it hard to write.

I liked this poem that turned out to be funny at the end. Throughout the poem, I thought this was a serious relationship. At the end it turned out that the persona of the first verse was a cat. It is ironical and humorous that a cat was crying for a dog. I liked that.

The tone was dreamy. This is because the cat's good times with the dog were short term. It is usually dreams that are short lived.

My favorite was at the end that was a pleasant surprise.

Write on!

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