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THE BANE OF CHIEF TWO-TENTS  [13+]
An uptight old Chieftain huffs and puffs over psycho-semantics
by DRSmith
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello, DRSmith
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Traincar2r* .

*Lock* I know, I already awarded the contest prize before sending in this review, which has been sitting in my review tool for weeks. *Rolleyes* I just wanted to say thanks for the laughs, the imagery and the sense of the nonsensical, it left me numb for a moment before I burst out laughing.

*Squirrel* Your poem was quick and quirky and packed with rhythm and rhyme and a little bit of "psycho-analyst" comedic verbiage. Or, it was just plain funny and deserved winning first place.

Loved this part:


"The dignified Doc simply winked when he said:
'Tis not for the time, but for talent instead.
Your problem, you see, came quickly to me,
Whether wigwam or teepee, it's all in your head."

It isn't easy to pack humor and poetry together in only fourteen lines, but you managed it nicely. *Wand*

Thanks again for entering! I'm returning your auto-reward GPs. *Smile*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WW
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 09/17/2014 @ 9:49am EDT
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