I saw this piece listed on the Please Review Page and took a look. I hope you find my comments helpful.

Okay, I know this is meant as a comedic piece, and it works, but I found a couple of things here that fit into the life I share with my wife...mainly the flash drive and computer problems. For my wife, the only thing a computer is good for is solitaire.

I saw no issues with grammar, spelling, or punctuation. Very well written.

The comedy that worked for me is the exaggerated statements, or at least I hope some of the statements are exaggerated.
Wakes me up at two AM to help her rearrange the furniture.
Once a month she tries on all of her clothes to see if I still like them.
Wakes me up at two AM to help her rearrange the furniture.

I enjoyed reading this short story, it's humorous and well written. We all try to write something that will resonate with the reader, and you've done that here. I'm betting that many husbands will read this and say, "I am not alone."


And thank you for the flash drive tip. And I'm glad no animals were hurt.