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Hello again!

For someone who doesn't like Villanelles, you're very good at writing them! You were given a challenge with this poem and you've risen to it in style.

You choose your words with great care, and your repeating lines are particularly strong which is so important in this form. You have great rhyme words too.

This is a very powerful poem on the subject of obsessive love which shows great insight.

I'm wondering if I should be worried! Ha! Seriously, your empathy and compassion really allows you to convey different characters so effectively both in your poetry and fiction.

You rock! Love ya!
Mark xxx


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