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Hello troy ulysses davis

I've always been a fan of acrostics, and it's great to see variations. I really enjoy haiku/senryu as well so I'm doubly impressed with what you've done here.

You make every word count which is vital for such short forms. I think this poem would work well even if the reader didn't know the first letter of each word spells 'truth' -- this device just adds more depth.

Great job!


Best wishes,
Mark


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