Review number # 3 of week September 18-24, 2014

Hi Marci,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: My Secret Lover

First Impression: In awe again, I am wicked impressed!

What I liked: How easily each line flowed to the next.

What needs your attention: Nothing, Marci, It is perfect as is!

Favorite Parts: He longs to be filled with passion and words only I can bestow. The image of you at the keyboard caressing each key giving the letters life. The next stanza just completes the image so perfectly.

Overall Impression: This is wicked awesome! You are truly blessed with writing talent!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .