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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello Angels in my Ear

This is a moving, thoughtful reflective poem, narrated by a writer who has too-long suppressed her creativity and urge to write. I think many readers on WDC will be able to relate to the subject of your poem. Many of us have found life events have interfered with our writing ambitions.

You show real talent here. The poem flows well, and your use of rhyme creates a wonderful rhythm.

On this evidence I would answer the questions posed at the end of your poem by saying, yes, you really should fight to let your creative soul free. It is obviously an important part of you.

It looks to me like you've got an extra space between the words 'phantom' and 'echoes' in your third to last stanza. Otherwise I didn't spot any errors.

Write on!

Best wishes,
Mark


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