This is a wonderful little poem on communication and its potential pitfalls. I love the descriptive language you use here. You've taken great care with your word choices and the poem feels very polished. Your short lines create a fast pace and the poem flows well.
The image in your opening stanza is striking and really grabbed my attention.
I love what you've done with the word, 'misunderstanding'. That's really creative.
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