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Alone  [13+]
The words unsaid often say more than anything else- and almost never what you mean.
by Carmen
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Carmen

This is a wonderful little poem on communication and its potential pitfalls. I love the descriptive language you use here. You've taken great care with your word choices and the poem feels very polished. Your short lines create a fast pace and the poem flows well.

The image in your opening stanza is striking and really grabbed my attention.

I love what you've done with the word, 'misunderstanding'. That's really creative.

Write on!

Best wishes,
Mark


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