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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello ♥ Jbradford is writing ♥

I must say I was intrigued by the title of this poem. The poem itself then exceeded my expectations and put a smile on my face. I particularly love your invented word, and also the humour in your last line.

The one thing that puzzled me about this short poem is your use of '||' after 'Look' in your second line. I wonder if a colon may work better if you feel punctuation is necessary.

This aside I really enjoyed discovering this fun poem today.

Keep writing.

Best wishes,
Mark


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