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| (4.5)  I totally understand life with chronic pain. We don't get old alone, we carry the burdens of our bodies wearing out on us before we are ready to give-up our activities. Thus, we search for the right arthritis medication, do our exercising so we don't "freeze" in place and even boost our nutrition intake to be able to do the stuff we love.  Your poem hits the pain nail on the head. It's done in a realistic way yet there is some touch of humor woven into it, albeit there is nothing funny about pain, I believe injecting a humor into our lives actually helps with our outlook and interpretation of pain. Well, done -- a couple lines were a little more wordy than the others in their stanzas, but it was merely a minor bump in the rhythm department. Reading out loud will catch those.I'm returning your auto-reward GPs.  I had to change the rating from "E" to "13+" due to the smoking and medication use. Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/24/2014 @ 6:27pm EDT