Review number # 5 of week Sept. 18-24, 2014

Hi Floyd,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Embalmers Lament

First Impression: It is definitely different!

What I liked: The enthusiasm, the author clearly demonstrates about what happens during the undertaking process.
What needs your attention:

Favorite Parts: The merry hum of the embalming machine that makes the author think of a ukulele strumming. I have never heard an embalming machine but I have enjoyed the beautiful sound a ukulele makes. The descriptions are not what I envisioned, I always believed a compassionate, sensitive person would choose preparing bodies for their families goodbye. If shocking the reader was your goal, you have accomplished that and then some.

Overall Impression: Unique and definitely eye opening.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .