Review number # 6 of week Sept. 18-24,2014

Hi Staurt,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Lover

First Impression: I needed a good chuckle this evening.

What I liked: The interesting names the women had in your poem.

What needs your attention: Nothing, it works like it is.

Favorite Parts: A one night stand with Clemmy, gave you an itch, the clinic and not an happy diagnosis. That made me burst right out laughing.

Overall Impression: A very amusing poem that definitely makes the reader smile.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




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