Review number # 1 of weekSeptember 25th-Oct.1, 2014

Hi Sid

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: We will survive

First Impression: I found the whale's point of view quite interesting.

What I liked: The whales point of view is sadly correct. Mankind is very destructive as the poet noted.

What needs your attention: Nothing, it is perfect.

Favorite Parts: My favorite verse is I am a mammal just like you all,I breathe because my lungs suck in air.
If I drop your kids in a gas tank-- Would you still happily stand and stare? That particular stanza made me stop and read it again. My stomach turned because I had never considered the effect of gasoline on their babies.

Overall Impression: I felt it was a very thought provoking poem that makes me even more aware how destructive humans are to ocean and its inhabitants.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my immense pleasure!
Lyn




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