Review number # 6 of week Sept. 25th-Oct. 1, 2014

Hi Sunnydaze,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Willow Palace

First Impression: Very beautiful imagery of the willow tree and the peace found.

What I liked: The second stanza with the curtain of branches that allow you to pass into a secret place.

What needs your attention: In the fourth stanza, I believe you meant sent not set to heaven, though I may be mistaken.

Favorite Parts: Nothing you can do is wrong under the beautiful weeping willow. I know the feeling, I have read many books curled up under the weeping willow in my grandparents back yard. It was the perfect place to be alone with my book for hours. I loved it.

Overall Impression: Very well done. I would center your poem on the page because it demonstrates in my opinion the author's confidence in their work. You have every reason to be confident, the poem is excellent.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




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