Hello glaedr

The sudden transformation in the mood and life pattern of the couple is a like the unexpected douse of water of cold water in the coldest season of the year. Whatever has happened to shared moments of love on the green grass? you depicted the golden moments in brief sparkling poesy.
"where nature breathes
and sighs our content"
Nature helps nurturing the germ of love. yet...
Fleeing of love is aptly shown as indifference to autumn, once a favored season.
lines that show the couple's falling apart has a great visual image.
"we stand alone together
clutching leaves."

Written in rhythmic free verse this poem is a reflection of emotions.
Is love as fleeting as the changing seasons?

It flows well.

Write on!