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Hello benaustin
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Boat*

You know, I was going to pass on this poem at first. I thought perhaps it's just a lot of repeat words with defining adjectives. But then I read it a few times and it started to grow on me. *Dragon*

You are quite correct of course that a house becomes a home when a family is added to it. *Teag*

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*Plug* Just this contradictory part kind of made me pause a bit:

"My family is selective" (discriminating)

AND

"My family is accepting"

The contradiction of these lines makes your family "selective" picking and choosing whom they allow inside their home; yet they are accepting of people. See what I mean?

*Tiedye4* Anyway, it was just a sticky part that caught my eye. However, I enjoyed the philosophy of it. This conclusion was the clincher!

"My house is weird and so is my family
My house and my family make my house a home"


I think we have all thought that our families were weird at some time or another when growing-up with our families. *Laugh* But it's true, they make the memories that warm the heart of the home. *Chicken*


Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch





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