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 Twin Flames  [E]
A poem about never-ending love.
by AngieM
Review of Twin Flames  
Review by jaya
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Angie

Poetic devices are beautifully used and helped in voicing the unconditional and the all-encompassing love you have for the "lover."
I can see alliteration and the use of participle have a role to play in the voice of the poet.
"Ebbing, flowing, flickering bright."

Feelings and effect of love are credible for those who go through a similar experience.
"Electrified I feel your face.
Magnetized by your embrace."

Some images are scintillating and win my praise.
"Meet me high above the clouds.
Where soul’s essence can sing out loud."
It is not like meeting someone at midnight. It is much more lofty to show souls singing (rapturously?) "above the clouds."

Obviously this is the kind of love that lasts through many lives.

Rhyming is winsome.

It flows well.

Write on!
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