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 Once Upon A Graveyard's Night  [13+]
An encounter with a talking statue on a cemetery's night brings a man to his horrid fate.
by Floyd Roots
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello,Floyd Roots!
This is a Simply Positive Review. *Bug*


*Hook* I was totally absorbed in your dark poem with chilling imagery coursing throughout each of the lines. The image of a cemetery keeper, started throwing sights and sounds and scenes of a set staged for splendid scares. *Grave*

*Cross1* The richness of this macabre tale woven into your poem just kept unfurling before the reader's eyes. The grotesque creaking stone figure, animated for those moments the keep was to be led to his own resting ground was clever. ( Even that part reveals a bit of chilling information. )

The more I read, the more I was pulled into the unearthly abyss. *Ghost*


Observation: A minor typo, easily fixed.


"That I may live and love and breath [breathe]
for yet another day!”


*Shuffle* This poem pulsated through my mind's eye with the creepiness that comes with viewing a personal hell through the eyes of a keep, seeing his dark destiny. *Monster1*

I enjoyed the form, the flow and the passion pouring forth from the fright fix that brings us ever closer to Halloween. *Poison*



Typo or not this one hit the creep bone that shows up each October. I do love that, you know. *Web1**Witch**Web2*

Kudos! *Buttonrewind*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



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