Hi Sisco,
This is a deeply emotional, remarkable poem. The tone formal, searching but full of hope. The reader is pulled in by the poem's elegance. They are filled with sympathy for the young person as they cope with tragedy and ultimately find peace. The rhyme is perfectly and gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The poem flows extremely well and is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from enjoying the poem. Great job.