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 "Christ-Sighted"   [E]
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Newbie!Welcome to WDC. *Flagv*
This is a Simply Positive Review.

*Clapper* Your message came across very profoundly yet in such a simple to understand way.

You remind the reader that there will always be crosses that we must bear, but it is which direction we decide to carry it, that will help us find the lighter side, the place where our spirit is thankful, feels joy and understands the gifts that we have received. *Suitclub*

I loved this part:

"No matter how we feel,

the outcome is in another's hands.

Stressing only hurts us more,

and weakens our faith to stand."

*Dropy* It is true that stress can make us give up and give in and feel personally tormented. However, it is the hand of the Creator that gives us gifts as well as challenges, and also free will, so we can choose the right path and never lose faith.

Well done, with just a tiny blip in rhythm :
"by the consequences to rise about." This is a little too wordy for its rhyming line, but does not take away from the inspiring beauty of this poem.*Starfishy*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



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