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Hi Odessa Molinari ,

I'm reviewing as a judge for "Invalid Item" . Thanks for entering the contest.

I enjoyed this story that was written from two different points of view. At first I was a bit confused and went back a little. That's when I got to know about the two POVs. I liked it very much but you could use a different font or color of font when you change views.

Other than that, I thought the story was enjoyable due to fun and naughty characters. I could relate with it because it just showed what are in the minds of us, young adults.

Keep writing and entering my contest.

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