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I was touched by this story abut two people who love each other parting ways. The suspense throughout about who exactly Rhea was and where was she going kept me reading. I liked the reactions of each character: the clenching of fists, holding of hands, etc. The ending was sad but I liked that the flower she left behind was her heart.
The only question that remains is who exactly was Rhea? Was she an angel or an alien or someone else?
I hope your power comes back. Write on and keep entering my contest.
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