Hello ANN Counselor, Lesbian & Happy! This is a Simply Positive Review. This was such a beautiful and deeply spiritual poem to read. It came on a day that I needed to read such words of reverence when others might have tried to muddy this message. Your strength and resolve resonate within each line. The rhythm moved like a melody of prayer and understanding, of the blessings bestowed upon all of mankind. I so enjoyed your acrostic. It reached a level that held my attention and is proof that there is more to an acrostic than placing the first letter in each line to spell out a word. There needs to be a depth of meaning that will enthrall the reader. Yours did that for me and surprise of surprises -- I am not a big fan of acrostics! Thank you for making me see this form of poetry in a different way being able to give it the respect it deserves when it is well penned. Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch
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