Review number # 1 of week Oct.9th-15th, 2014

Hi Barlowtoo,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Lark

First Impression: Initially, I thought typical family in a new neighborhood.

What I liked: How the family tried to fit in with their neighbors.

What needs your attention: It was only five minutes before Abdul was opening the door to there new home. (It should be their not there.)

Favorite Parts: That Santo said nothing to his wife about the scarf, just indulged her by wearing one each day to work. The simple kindness exhibits much love for her.

Overall Impression: The story was well written and enjoyable. I did not expect the scimitar to resolve the issue. Problem solved. Great surprise ending.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .