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Just the importance and advantages of books.
by Shan
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Review by Charlie ~
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello, Shan . My name is Charlie and I'm happy to welcome you to the site with a review today. If you have any questions or need help navigating the site, feel free to email me. Keep in mind that the following is just one reader's opinion. I am not a professional and you know your writing best. If you find something helpful here, use it. If you don't, feel free to disregard this review completely. *Peace2*

*Jackolantern* Title, Hook, and Formatting: The title is simple and effective. The poem is all about the value of books, so I think it works well. I liked the treasure/pleasure lines in the beginning. I thought it was a good way to kick off the poem.

*Jackolantern* Best Bits: Nice job with showing how people of all ages can enjoy and learn from books. I also liked where you talked about life being a book and our experiences or the people we meet filling the pages.

*Jackolantern* Possible Suggestions: I would suggest not capitalizing each word of a new sentence. Poetry should follow basic grammar rules, so there should only be commas and capitalization where necessary. Some of the language and phrasing wasn't for me. I didn't really understand the last couple lines about the value of money going down where the value of books doesn't go down. Used books can't be sold for the same amount as new books, they immediately decrease in value. Though you could say that they retain sentimental value well, I wouldn't quite compare it to the value of actual money.

*Jackolantern* Summary: Overall, I enjoyed reading your poem. I thought there were some clever ideas in it. Some parts didn't quite add up for me and I think the grammar could use some work. Thanks again for sharing!

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