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Memories In Residence  [E]
Senior moments of romantic memories seem faded. Yet what is love, truly never disappears.
by turtlemoon-dohi
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Hi turtlemoon-dohi ,

This is a Simply Positive Review
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This was a very nice poem about two ghost lovers meeting. I like that I heard the whispers and wind chymes, felt the wet kisses, saw ghostly figures. The language appealed to my senses. I would really like to get a particular scent. My only question is, who was the persona? Was he/she one of the ghosts?

I wish you could add a verse of two to this poem. It was very nicely written.

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