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The Polar Bears are Hunting Us  [13+]
What we thought was an illusion is actually another race of beings studying us
by JTown
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi JTown ,

This is a wonderful, spooky and according to me, very real. To me it's as if you observe the behavior and your surrounding a lot. It is very true that children and animals can see what the adults can't. My original reason is that children are more innocent, so they can see supernatural beings. Another reason from your story that is more scientific is that children are not fully developed physically, so the do not pay much attention to their surrounding, and by not concentrating everything in focus, they get a chance to see what we can't see because we're too busy concentrating in the material dimension.

Well written! Even the explanation about photography is so relevant and well connected to this story. It reminds me of a horror movie The Eye. You should watch it, but not when you're alone.

Write on!


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