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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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The Jack-O-Lantern:*Jackolantern* (Title, description, etc...): Both very good, eye-catching and match your story very well.


The Costume: (Contents): A nicely plotted piece full of conflict and strained emotions.

The Treats: *MugO* (Imagery, Emotion)

The emotional pull of this piece is what made this story shine for me. I found it very easy to slip into it's world and view it through the Doctor's eyes. Emotions are strong and sharply different in each character.
Characters are very different in personalities, though perhaps not so much in morals! *Smile* You did a great job in the setting and seperation of each character in your re-write.
The Tricks:*Cat2* (Suggestions)
         

The Full Moon:*Ghost* (Overall Thoughts)

I found the rewritten version much stronger in both enjoyment and depth of characters and events. A well plotted piece that had me both chuckling and holding my breath for what could happen. Your ending did not dissapoint.

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