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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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The Jack-O-Lantern:*Jackolantern* (Title, description, etc...): I like the second title much better! Catchy and description is cute and accurate to content.

The Costume: (Contents):

A cute story about an engaging, intelligent sixth grade boy. You added more detail to your rewrite, which is nice and adds flavour to the story, but it is basically much like your original version. I did enjoy the mystery of the piece as well as it's humour. It carries an important lesson for all ages and the ending is very satisifying. It certainly engages the reader throughout!

The Treats: *MugO* (Imagery, Emotion)
Imaniative use of imagery that suits a child of this age and makes it easy for readers to relate to characters. Setting is well portrayed. Emotion is good and well managed throughout.

The Tricks:*Cat2* (Suggestions)
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None, grammer, spelling and formatting are well done throughout story.

The Full Moon:*Ghost* (Overall Thoughts)
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While I truly enjoyed this story, I gave it this rating because I didn't feel there was significant change between original and rewritten versions. It is definately no reflection on quality or writing style of this story which I would highly recommend to others who enjoy humour with a message enclosed.


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