Review number # 2 of week October 16-22nd, 2014

Hi Rhyssa

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Monstrous Cocktails

First Impression: Each piece is amusingly bad poetry.

What I liked: The creativity that goes into writing bad poetry, I think is harder to do than good poetry.

What needs your attention: Nothing this port is perfect.

Favorite Parts: I really like Dracula's Muddled Rebuttal and Why the Gofl Cart Died the best.

Overall Impression: Worthy of much more than one star but the criteria says one star reflects the best. You are an exceptionally talented woman.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .