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 Stories Come and Go  [E]
Stories come and go, just like people---
by Lilith Michelle
Review by eyestar~*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Balloong* Welcome to WDC Lilith!. I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Cat*

*Fairyr*I was drawn to the title on the Read A Newbie page and was intirgugeud by the notion of stories coming and going. *Wink*

*Fairyr*I don't know if this is poetry per se, maybe prose, but I like the concept you are expressing and the way it flows along. You could make it look like a poem if you were to arrange it differently on the page. *Wink*

*Fairyr*It has a delightful voice and energy as you explore your idea about stories and the effect they have on you. The comparison of stories to people is unique and interesting.

*Fairyr* The line "some make you feel, some make you realize" gave me pause and wow!!I It is evocative and ture too so you make me think of which books I might classify this way.. Well done!

*Fairyr*Thanks for sharing your craft and this way of connecting story, people, and characters. Keep on musing! *Star*

Light on the path as you write on!
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