This is a lovely poem about the joys of music appreciation. Good music has certainly helped carry me through some of the toughest times in my life and take me out of myself for awhile so I very much agree with the sentiment of your poem. You use descriptive words to great effect, doing a grand job of describing music in words. Your short lines help the poem flow well.
Your seventh line, 'They rhythmic beats rise' I think should read 'The rhythmic beats rise'. I didn't spot any other errors.
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