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 Oasis of Love  [E]
This is not Senryu
by Beautiful Candy
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Beautiful Candy

This is an insightful poem that conveys strong emotion in very few words. I chose to read this because I really like the title and was intrigued. Having now read the poem I think the title is very fitting and sums up the idea at the heart of this piece.

In such short poetry every word has to carry a lot of weight and they really do here.

I found no errors, can't think of any way of improving the poem and think it's perfect just as it is. Therefore I'm very happy to give 5 stars.

Write on!

Best wishes,
Mark


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