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Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC. *Suitclub*
This is a Simply Positive Review.

*Umbrella* I know there is one heck of a blood curdling story that will be enjoyed very much to readers who love the horror/scary genre. The issue I had was that it was so difficult to read. I had to reread several lines and then go back and try to read the story again to get what was happening. I don't think too many readers will continue on to thoroughly read and review because of the formatting issues.It's a shame too, because, as I said, there is one creepy story lurking within these paragraphs. *Bug*

*Telephone* I suggest that you edit this story to eliminate font or markers from a copy-past of another site or a word processor that is not compatible with WDC when it's downloaded from there.

Additional Observation:

"The awfully cackling of an anon entity choking her
[The awful cackle of an anonymous entity ... ] Don't abbreviate anonymous with "anon" it doesn't look professional used within a story.

I saw a cool and creepy story in between trying to put sentences together where the incompatible font-markers could be translated or ignored. I think with a little editing for a smoother read, this story will howl out the Halloween season dramatically! *Monster3*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch





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