Hello there, Newbie. Welcome to WDC .
This is a Simply Positive Review.

Your poem touches deeply into the world of suffering a terrible disease that eats away at the brain and the very soul. Depression kills, whether it is a physical death or a spiritual/emotional one. It robs one of their ability to find worth and emphasizes the fear and shortcomings.

Your poem hits all the notes of those fears. It seems at times that the power it has over one is so encompassing that nothing can break through.

Kudos on your sharing such deep emotions that will reach readers in such a profound way.

Observations

"Id choose to die [I'd]"
"Id choose to lie [I'd]"

"Painful tho [though] it'd be"

"You was [were] not there"

With a little edit here and there, your poem will shine bright and flow smoothly without the little distractions mentioned above.

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch


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