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Review of Shadows of Me  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Riot
This is a Simply Positive Review. *Seaweed*


*Crayons5* I liked your philosophical poem. We all go through life's phases experiencing a wide range of emotions from turbulence to joy and even lonely or very boring times where it seems we can't kick-start our muse for anything we are planning.

*Fairyl* Life is as full as one wishes to make it. We are all creatures of reaction that pull in a negative force. Wouldn't it make a huge difference if we could always corner the action-side over the reaction side which likely keeps things flowing positively in our lives.

*Wave4* Ahh, the human mind and its interpretations do tend to get in the way of joy if we let it happen.

Love the title "Shadows on Me." Well chosen words and a smooth read. *Seahorsev*

Observation:
"she lives alone in shadows of gee"

The word "gee" seems an odd fit here. Why not glee? It means great merriment, which I think one should feel after winning a spelling bee. Just my observation.

That was the only glitchy part for me.


Well done! *Check5*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



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