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Getting to Know Her Better  [13+]
That hot chick he was so happy to win- there was indeed more to her than a pretty face.
by SapphireDragonScales
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi SapphireDragonScales ,

I'm reviewing as the judge of "Supernatural Writing Contest - Closed" .

This is a fun story with a spine-tingling twist at the end. I like the relationship between Olivia and Matt and the trust he has for Olivia.

The crow pecking that the window was a good way to show that Matt was scared of her stories.

The title, however, revealed the suspense of the story. Alternative titles could be New Girlfriend. I'm sure you can come up with better.

Keep writing!

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